Sunday, June 23, 2013

Early blooms

early blooms
on the bridal wreath—
the many years
before I could picture
myself dressed in white

—Moonbathing, Issue 8, Spring/Summer 2013

















I believe the early blooms appeared in late winter.

4 comments:

  1. A winsome nod to a delicate, pretty little flower (a type of spirea, if I'm not mistaken). I love the idea (which you captured so well) of a flower's presence through a life(from childhood to bride):
    "the many years
    before I could picture
    myself dressed in white"

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  2. A lovely, subtle little poem with layers of meaning hidden in the contrast between "early blooms" and "many years."

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  3. Thanks, you two. This one has a particular meaning for me and my life, but I enjoy hearing others' valid interpretations of it. An interesting feature of the tanka form/genre? The ambiguity that typically is left within the lines so readers can participate?

    Yes, bridal wreath is a spirea. It's one of the few plants we seem to be able to grow here without a lot of difficulty. By the start of autumn, it's looking fairly scraggly, almost burnt from the harsh summer sun (so I have to trim out a few branches). But it starts returning to life in late Feb. What I don't like: that the blooms only last for a short while - because they're marvelous!

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  4. I saw this in Moonbathing. It made me remember my own teenage years when I dreamed of getting married, but felt I would never be so lucky because I was shy and wore glasses. The agonies we go through when we are young seem so small now that there are more important things to worry about.

    Adelaide

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