Love the last three lines! The poem turns on the careful word choice in line 3, which keeps the reader pondering: is it just a notion, or can we . . .?
I enjoyed your comments, Jennifer, Vandana, Jenny, and Susan! Yes, the researching was exciting and so was the actual trip. I'm ready for another such vacation.
Forgive me if I don't visit your own blogs for a while. One of my eyes/muscles is still goofed up. The PC seems to be hard on them.
I must put one on the to do list! Researching a getaway is so exciting...imagining what will be almost takes you there!
ReplyDeleteHmmmm adventure to the fore!!
ReplyDeleteLove the last three lines! The poem turns on the careful word choice in line 3, which keeps the reader pondering: is it just a notion, or can we . . .?
ReplyDeleteCould be day dreaming, philosphical, or reality - love the mood it sets... now I want to float away too...
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your comments, Jennifer, Vandana, Jenny, and Susan! Yes, the researching was exciting and so was the actual trip. I'm ready for another such vacation.
ReplyDeleteForgive me if I don't visit your own blogs for a while. One of my eyes/muscles is still goofed up. The PC seems to be hard on them.
Sigh . . . if only.
ReplyDeletemaybe some day, wendy. or, you can go on an imaginary one with me sometime?
ReplyDeleteI hope your eyes recover soon. A river cruise sounds like just the medicine to cure all ills.
ReplyDeleteAdelaide
yes, it is!
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