tanka, other poetry, & insignificant writings of janet lynn davis
The spirit is transported in the vastness of open space. You've captured that beautifully, here, Janet.
Ah, but it's not the same sky psychologically, is it? Some of us need that spaciousness. A very relatable poem!
thank you, wendy and jenny. I think I'm one of those who, at least at this point in my life, needs that spaciousness or vastness.
The same sky, but not the same effect for sure. My thoughts need space, too. Well said, Janet!
It does seem that vast spaces give rise to vast thoughts.Adelaide
thanks for your comments, jennifer and adelaide!
You capture so much in so few words Janet--beautiful write
Thanks, Audrey. Writing tanka is addictive.