twigs&stones: Bitter wind

Friday, January 8, 2016

Bitter wind

bitter wind
the scent of orange
in my face cream

—Mariposa, 33, Autumn/Winter 2015

4 comments:

Jenny Ward AngyalJanuary 9, 2016 at 7:03 AM
Evocative contrasts packed into a tiny poem. Nicely done.
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Jennifer WagnerJanuary 9, 2016 at 1:47 PM
Perfect!
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Wendy BourkeJanuary 9, 2016 at 8:51 PM
Scent awakens our recollections, with an intensity that none of our other senses confer. Lovely tanka!
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janetldJanuary 11, 2016 at 6:20 PM
thanks!
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