tanka, other poetry, & insignificant writings of janet lynn davis
Wonderful!
thank you, jenny.
The delicate sense of rebirth conveyed in the first two lines contrasts powerfully with the last two. An intense - and very moving - tanka, Janet.
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I did not intend to remove my comment, just reword it. These trophies are sad to see. How can anyone be proud of killing a deer, except if it is needed for food?Adelaide
thanks, wendy.thanks, adelaide. I'm always bothered by those trophies.
Whew. This one has such a powerful turn.
Oh this one gets me--beautifully penned though
Thank you for visiting and commenting, Jennifer and Audrey.
Wonderful!
ReplyDeletethank you, jenny.
ReplyDeleteThe delicate sense of rebirth conveyed in the first two lines contrasts powerfully with the last two. An intense - and very moving - tanka, Janet.
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DeleteI did not intend to remove my comment, just reword it. These trophies are sad to see. How can anyone be proud of killing a deer, except if it is needed for food?
DeleteAdelaide
thanks, wendy.
Deletethanks, adelaide. I'm always bothered by those trophies.
Whew. This one has such a powerful turn.
ReplyDeleteOh this one gets me--beautifully penned though
ReplyDeleteThank you for visiting and commenting, Jennifer and Audrey.
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