tanka, other poetry, & insignificant writings of janet lynn davis
thank you, jenny.
The delicate sense of rebirth conveyed in the first two lines contrasts powerfully with the last two. An intense - and very moving - tanka, Janet.
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I did not intend to remove my comment, just reword it. These trophies are sad to see. How can anyone be proud of killing a deer, except if it is needed for food?Adelaide
thanks, wendy.thanks, adelaide. I'm always bothered by those trophies.
Whew. This one has such a powerful turn.
Oh this one gets me--beautifully penned though
Thank you for visiting and commenting, Jennifer and Audrey.