Monday, August 15, 2016

Summer sun

summer sun
our minds bare and aligned
we discuss
both the pain of change
and the need for it

Eucalypt, 19 (fall 2015)

4 comments:

  1. Very poignant. I especially like the thought-provoking second line.

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  2. I like this.

    Thanks for visiting.

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  3. Interesting choice of the word "aligned" - it conveyed (for me) an element of wishful or hopefulness. I don't recall a time in my life where - universally - and on so many levels, there is such strong hope for the world to move ever-so-slightly in a more positive direction ... so, perhaps, that is why that word resonated with me the way that it did. Another thought provoking piece, Janet.

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  4. Thanks for the comments, all.

    I know what you mean, Wendy. "I don't recall a time in my life where - universally - and on so many levels, there is such strong hope for the world to move ever-so-slightly in a more positive direction …"

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