Saturday, August 24, 2013

Hotel room

hotel room—
wind through the palm trees
muffles his snores

Presence, #48, June 2013


8 comments:

  1. This piece brought a smile. I was not expecting the last line. But so true of long term relationships. A lovely capture - with a charming whisper of reality (which you do so well).

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  2. Enjoyed your wry haiku! Would that it were true . . .

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  3. thank you, wendy and jenny!
    perhaps I should plant some palm trees here. ;) (bad of me writing poems about him.)

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  4. Love it! Mine doesn't snore so much anymore--yay!

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  5. Love the humour in your haiku...

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  6. thanks, jennifer (yay indeed!) and frank (and nice to meet you).

    j.

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  7. Oh, so familiar. Funny and true.

    Adelaide

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