Sunday, August 11, 2013

Reading tanka

reading tanka
and yet more tanka
about cherry blossoms
how I crave 
the top of a sundae

—red lights, Vol. 2, No. 2, June 2006
Note: Removed all the punctuation from the earlier version. Am happier now. ;)

It's been years, maybe decades, since I've had a real sundae.

2 comments:

  1. As adults, why don't we indulge once in awhile? I haven't had one either, or a banana split, or an ice-cream soda or a double-scoop cone. Maybe tomorrow I'll skip lunch and have something really fattening.,

    Adelaide

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    1. Sounds good! Maybe I'll just have a bite or two of yours.

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