tanka, other poetry, & insignificant writings of janet lynn davis
What a lovely nuanced message in this - very cool - little tanka. This one is very special, Janet.
The poem makes a subtle segue into metaphor--how many things need the sun behind them before we see them shine?
I agree with Wendy and Jenny. Brava, Janet!
thanks for the feedback, wendy, jennifer, and jenny!
More than one meaning is possible here. A lovely tanka.Adelaide
thank you, adelaide.