Thursday, September 25, 2014

Summer gone

summer gone
a crowd of Susans
against the fence ...
dark eyes still smiling
in their come-hither way

The Bamboo Hut, vol 1, no. 2, January 2014


4 comments:

  1. Yes, line 5 is a wonderful finish to a charming picture--how summer beckons even as she leaves us.

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  2. I have always thought of Susan's that way - dark eyed at the end of summer. Lovely capture, Janet.

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  3. thanks, trusted fellow bloggers jennifer, jenny, wendy!

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