Friday, November 13, 2015

A jumbled heap

a jumbled heap 
of lantana clippings
left to dry—
line by crooked line
I untangle my words

—cattails, May 2015



5 comments:

  1. What a great metaphor, and most relatable. You've done a good job of untangling here!

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  2. I really like seeing those words as lantana clippings! Craftily done--in a good way, of course ;-)

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  3. an awesome metaphor ... and very skillfully rendered: a lovely flow to this.

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