tanka, other poetry, & insignificant writings of janet lynn davis
What a great metaphor, and most relatable. You've done a good job of untangling here!
I really like seeing those words as lantana clippings! Craftily done--in a good way, of course ;-)
an awesome metaphor ... and very skillfully rendered: a lovely flow to this.
thanks, Jennifer and Wendy!
What a great metaphor, and most relatable. You've done a good job of untangling here!
ReplyDeleteI really like seeing those words as lantana clippings! Craftily done--in a good way, of course ;-)
ReplyDeletean awesome metaphor ... and very skillfully rendered: a lovely flow to this.
ReplyDeletethanks, Jennifer and Wendy!
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