Saturday, November 28, 2015

The one time

the one time
my father saw his father
…….... from afar 
too hard to decipher
the character lines

 —A Hundred Gourds, 4:4, September 2015
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4 comments:

  1. Jenny Ward AngyalNovember 29, 2015 at 6:21 AM

    An excellent middle-of-the-story with many meanings layered in the closing lines.

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    1. janetldNovember 30, 2015 at 12:21 AM

      Thank you, Jenny!
      But I now see that I already posted this one just 5 weeks ago! My memory is going...

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  2. Jennifer WagnerNovember 30, 2015 at 8:56 PM

    Yes, a layered piece. So much in so few lines!

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