Saturday, November 28, 2015

The one time

the one time
my father saw his father

…….... from afar 
too hard to decipher
the character lines


—A Hundred Gourds, 4:4, September 2015

4 comments:

  1. An excellent middle-of-the-story with many meanings layered in the closing lines.

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    1. Thank you, Jenny!
      But I now see that I already posted this one just 5 weeks ago! My memory is going...

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  2. Yes, a layered piece. So much in so few lines!

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