Sunday, April 10, 2016

With the news

with the news
a faint dusting of snow ...
the word hospice
lodged in my mind,
freezing melting freezing

GUSTS, #23, spring/summer 2016

4 comments:

  1. This one has so much quiet power. The jux & especially the last line are wonderful.

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  2. Very evocative and layered with interpretation - the stuff of life caught, so delicately (and often precariously, I think) in a faint dusting of snow.

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  3. Thanks, you three!
    No dustings of snow for us this past year…a v. warm winter.

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