Mementos
Janet Lynn Davis, USA ("what to keep")
& Jo McInerney, Australia ("we repair")
what to keep,
what to throw away ...
tiny rhinestones
missing from the wings
of her butterfly brooch
we repair
her diamante bow
before pinning it
to her burial shift ...
the hope of resurrection
—Skylark, 4:1, Summer 2016
From Jo:
The woman for whom this tanka was written was Mum's oldest sister and outlived her by 27 years. She was my daughter's surrogate grandmother and my second mother. When she died I felt as though I had been orphaned again.
From Janet:
This is my first Mother's Day without the earthly presence of my mother, Joan (pronounced JoAnn), who passed away on April 20 after a lengthy, debilitating illness. The world feels a little silent now. (I did, of course, keep the butterfly pin.)
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What a beautiful and moving pair of tanka for Mothers' Day!
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely and tender - the collaborative tanka sequence so touching: it's amazing when one considers that it was written by two individuals. The repairing and pinning of the diamante bow is very moving and really stirs a cascade of emotive feelings. The words: God Bless Her - unsaid ... but there.
ReplyDeleteMy heartfelt sympathy on your Mother's passing, Janet.
Thanks for your thoughtful sentiments.
DeleteOh, wow. So beautiful, so touching. What an excellent collab.
ReplyDeletethank you, jennifer.
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