on my knees
in a forest of weeds ...
through the night
the chatter of small things
I rip from my life
—Eucalypt, 20, Spring 2016 (Distinctive Scribblings award)
Many thanks to Jenny Ward Angyal for selecting my tanka but especially for her beautiful, thoughtful appraisal, a work of art in its own right.
Janet, this is wonderful--it speaks to me on so many levels--really well crafted!
ReplyDeleteso glad to hear that, audrey. thank you.
DeleteWow...I agree with Audrey!
ReplyDeleteMy pleasure,Janet!
ReplyDeleteLovely: layered and contemplative.
ReplyDeletethanks, jennifer, jenny, and wendy.
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