tanka, other poetry, & insignificant writings of janet lynn davis
Speaking, as someone who often comes out of a lyrical reflection, greeted by a where-were-you inquiring face, I so got this piece - and smiled.
glad you got it ... thanks!!
Love it! Wonderful jux between the birdsong & the new poem forming. Love line 5--craw is so exactly the right word for the place where new poems form.
Strike while the iron is hot! That elusive poem can go astray so easily.Adelaide
thanks, jenny and adelaide!right now, new poems don't seem to be forming anywhere inside me!