Sunday, June 9, 2013

Pine-needle nest

pine-needle nest
with an unhatched egg ...
I carry it
to the edge of the woods
where birdsong is thickest


Skylark, 1:1, Summer 2013


8 comments:

  1. Beautiful metaphor. Really exquisite.

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  2. thanks, wendy and jenny. i was unsure about this one - and am glad you like it.

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  3. lovely, Janet . . . "where birdsong is thickest"--so beautiful.

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  4. thanks, maggie.
    p.s. I enjoyed taking another tour recently at your blog!

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  5. This one is my favorite so far.

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    1. Don't know why it shows my HubPages name above and not my real name...??? Ugh I'm so bad at this stuff.

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  6. I don't know, Sandra. I'm not very techy myself!

    Thanks for stopping by!

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