Friday, April 4, 2014

The porch bench

the porch bench
dusted with pale yellow
this spring
our closeness breaks down
into a fine powder

Fire Pearls 2 (anthology), 2013


7 comments:

  1. A lovely expression of life's passages, Janet. A very pretty piece.

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  2. thanks, wendy! I remember this one gave me minors fits at the time. glad to know it turned out okay!

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  3. The way you worked seasonal imagery and relationship in this is brilliant!

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  4. Wonderful jux, subtle, effective metaphor! Many layers to this one.

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  5. I appreciate the comments, jennifer and jenny. And glad it's working better than I thought!

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  6. thanks, lisa, and nice to see you.

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