tanka, other poetry, & insignificant writings of janet lynn davis
Enjoy the break with gusto
I enjoy this poem and the one before. You say so much in a few perfect words.
thank you, vandana and gail for commenting!
Love the metaphorical possibilities of L 4 & 5!
A whimsical metaphor! Love it.
what a lovely poem!
thanks, susan I-know-who, jenny, wendy, and lisa! there's something about both crisp fall days and the sound and feel of breaking the ends off fresh asparagus. (btw, we can get fresh asparagus throughout the year here.) and sometimes it feels good to just move on.
Ahh yes, perfect. And I love asparagus...mmm!