Wednesday, July 29, 2015

One sultry day

one sultry day
sinks into the next ...
a mud dauber
intent on mating
with its reflection


A Hundred Gourds, 3:4, September 2014

5 comments:

  1. What a great evocation of the oppressive, closed-in feeling of these dog days! Love the metaphorical implications in your lower verse.

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  2. Dog days, indeed ... perfect capture! And that close - ha - I don't recall "boring" ever being expressed quite so eloquently.

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