Tuesday, August 4, 2015

Shards of rainbow

shards of rainbow
spattered across the floor. . .
this pause
in my afternoon
to study the hues

 —Simply Haiku, Spring 2008, vol 6 no 1

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  1. janetldAugust 6, 2015 at 7:53 AM

    thanks, gail!

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  2. Wendy BourkeAugust 7, 2015 at 8:19 PM

    Loved this! So creative. And that rainbow! It just goes to show you that, within the comparatively diminutive tanka form, there are many imaginative features to discover and explore.

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    1. janetldAugust 9, 2015 at 10:58 AM

      thanks so much! I wrote this one several years ago, but I still can remember that "rainbow" on the floor.

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  3. AdelaideAugust 10, 2015 at 8:08 PM

    I love rainbows in unexpected places. Lovely.

    Adelaide

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