Something
in the Air
by
Janet Lynn Davis (prose) and Susan Burch (tanka)
I
catch myself staring at the cracks in her thickly applied pink lipstick. Then
it happens. Something from somewhere lands in one of my eyes,
aggravating a contact lens and as per usual triggering a
mini-waterfall.
At
the eleventh hour, just as I need to get serious about my required
research paper, my Freshman English instructor, via swift
strokes with her red pen, presses me to switch to a more-traditional
(aka stodgy) topic. That's why I'm now sitting here in her dank
little office behind the classroom: to assert myself.
In
a flash, her face freezes as she no doubt notices the waterworks.
“Okay. You can go ahead with it,” she sheepishly acquiesces. “I
was only afraid things would get too psychological for me.” With
that, she officially approves my original topic: Why
People Laugh.
This
probably wasn't the first time tears saved me. I run with it.
I
blink my eye
to get
a lash out—
the
married guy
sharing
the elevator
winks
back at me
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Authors'
Note: For
those unfamiliar with U.S. university curriculums, "Freshman
English" refers to a first-year English literature and
composition course (or courses).
—Haibun
Today,
vol 9 no. 2, June 2015
Thanks to fellow poet Susan for working on this with me. Was fun to do! By the way, what I write about here (the prose) really did happen.
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—Haibun
Today,
vol 9 no. 2, June 2015
Thanks to fellow poet Susan for working on this with me. Was fun to do! By the way, what I write about here (the prose) really did happen.
A great collaboration! I love the irony of the research paper's title. One reason people laugh is because they've read this entertaining and relatable tanka story!
ReplyDeleteOh, those coincidences! Humorous! Fantastic!
ReplyDeleteLove this oh-so-human capture. Very cool ... and funny!
ReplyDeleteLove it! Funny human stories are what makes people laugh.
ReplyDeleteAdelaide
Glad you all found this entertaining! As far as the prose goes, it's true, down to the last detail (though I'm not certain about the exact wording of the title of the paper, since that paper, for which I received an A, long ago disappeared).
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